She sat, She looked, She thought. Her life, Not worth living, Flashed before her eyes. She could end it all, With one quick movement, Gone. She looked, She thought, She sat. Her anger boiled, She picked up the knife, One quick movement, GONE. |
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I suggest you get yourself a thesaurus, and when writing a poem look up the words you want to use and see if you can find a better one, for example....
Instead of
"She sat,
She looked,
She thought."
You could say
"She lingered,
She eyed,
She pondered"
All in all tho it's much better writing than I did at your age, so keep it up.
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Brill poem Cass alot of meaning and emotion...
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